Sweatheart,
you were feeling safe at home…
They sent a bomb on to your heads with your parents,
your face covered with blood,
...
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A great, awesome, thought-provoking poem. My prayer is that the Children of Abraham on both 'sides' will stop killing each other. Amen
very very sad and true...hope God will rescue all Muslims...10 Hataw
a really true story, happening ths time, , nice poem written in beautiful lines.. a feeling of a very concern ctzen to his country.. nice poem..
great good job.... well it's wonderful poem.... full of human feelings and meanings..that we cann't see it... all over the world... I hope that your voice convey the moral messege for who doesn't respect this words... 10+++++++++ thanks keep it up 8) Laila
Personally coming from a conflict zone, i do share your pain and grief. Your poem touches, reflects sadly the loss grief and love. Do keep writing.