Sunday, May 21, 2017

To Sun With Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I know, I know, yes I know
Why did you spring beautiful flowers?
My deaf and dumb silent teacher,
The music down pouring in the showers
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Akhtar Jawad
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An interesting conversation with the sun. I know, I know, yes I know, What do you teach by springing flowers? I am not deaf and dumb, I listen to, I sing, What you convey through music of showers. You can never tell how you loved her above, Bu I shall write and sing my story of love. May you be blessed with sun's brilliant rays of love and light! 10+++

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Loke Kok Yee 28 May 2017

You praised the sun in a way that only you can and opened up a beautiful view for me. Thank you sir.

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 May 2017

Beautiful poem. Music flowing on serenic beauty. Loved reading it.

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 May 2017

This is beautiful poetry with a great flow, rhyming and sweetness. Enjoyed the dance of words thoroughly. Thanks for posting.10+++

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Khalida Bano Ali 21 May 2017

A beautiful poem that touches........................................................

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