To Suffocate
If I could turn back the time when clock's stopped
I feel like I'd be able to put the pieces back together like I was on top
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A poignant poem...I liked the powerful expression....Top score.
Love and break up, of course, is an ordinary melancholy theme. What makes it different and extraordinary is your unique poetic talent, Amber. Great poetry!
Thank you guys for your comments you guys are amazing. Im glad you liked my poem. Have a great day.
Some well worked lines said from the heart quite matter-of-factly show's promise.