Thursday, June 9, 2022

To Suffocate Comments

Rating: 4.7

To Suffocate

If I could turn back the time when clock's stopped
I feel like I'd be able to put the pieces back together like I was on top
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Amber Piercy
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Mark Heathcote 25 June 2022

Some well worked lines said from the heart quite matter-of-factly show's promise.

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Amber Piercy 13 June 2022

Thank you guys for liking my work i greatly appreciate it

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 June 2022

A poignant poem...I liked the powerful expression....Top score.

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Love and break up, of course, is an ordinary melancholy theme. What makes it different and extraordinary is your unique poetic talent, Amber. Great poetry!

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Amber Piercy 11 July 2022

Thank you guys for your comments you guys are amazing. Im glad you liked my poem. Have a great day.

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