Saturday, March 30, 2019

To Someone With Love Comments

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You have seen me plucking a rose for your silky hairs,
You have seen me waiting for you on midway of the stairs,
You have seen me on the street purchasing for you the eclairs,
You have seen me chasing you in the colourful rainy fairs,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 April 2019

NO ONE KNOWS who will go first women love to go first but men cannot stay without a woman be she a wife or consort life without a woman can never be thought life and love make a couple let Lord design a sample when both go together as they breakfast or in the Garden of their own Eden collect their final present a ROSE JA JANABH THE BEST PAK POET

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 March 2019

A very touching poem. Death will terminate everything and it always creates emptiness in the heart of a loved one. The closure lines are poignant. Beautifully written.

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Anil Kumar Panda 30 March 2019

Oh! ! Such a heartfelt poem. Death snatches away all we have. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.

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Konab Ghumman 30 March 2019

I always saw you sweetheart but you were never Soon I shall leave you and I shall leave forever! wonderfully intrpretd.

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