Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, September 13, 2012

To Soar In Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

When you reminded me of "broken wings"
I lost beautiful ground and failed to sing
It was severe blow to my own kingdom
I have witnessed such beautiful creature seldom
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 September 2012

Jen Walls Hasmukh, your To Soar In Sky is so deeply tender and spiritually affectionate to the soul...I feel the depth of this write and I so love I shall grow when you blow with gentle wind and with river's flow... You are certainly a tender heart to achieve this lovely write. Thanks!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2012

last line say it all Tom Kennedy11 hours ago I enjoy your honest writings....Hasmukh Your poet friend, Tom Kennedy Comment +1 It goood

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2012

Your poet friend, Tom Kennedy Comment +1 It goood

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2012

Rahima YAsin12 hours ago Its different! ! Comment +1 a poem of choice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2012

Alan Green 'Guppyman'12 hours ago the poet says it is one or the other

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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