Wednesday, December 16, 2009

To Sleep Comments

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To sleep is to escape
To feel free
Away from all that is real
In the comfort of ones dreams
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vanessa feliciano
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David Mountain 14 January 2010

Nothing wrong with this Vanessa, it reads well and has good meaning. Some would say mine is an extreme view although it does express my own experience of sleep depravity well.Anotrher poem I've listed 'Foraken' gives another view on hidden fear perhaps you would like to look at that. Thanks for commenting. David

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James S Newcomb Lang 17 December 2009

I wish I could escape to my dreams, but there lies my nemesis. However, I'm pleased you can sometimes.

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giggling wonder 16 December 2009

yea this poem is very good and so true.

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vanessa feliciano

vanessa feliciano

Charlotte NC
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