Sunday, March 31, 2019

To Sketch You A Sunrise Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I, to sketch you a sunrise,
On an empty calling canvas
New and all your own
I'd use the kindest colors, soft
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Susan Lacovara
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Jennifer Birchall 10 April 2019

You have painted a beautiful picture with your words dear Susan.

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 April 2019

All to behold...for you, to you My most humble hand-painted morning " Hello" ///..superb poem and poetic expression

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Prabir Gayen 31 March 2019

Very intuitive writing..........10+++++++

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Prabir Gayen 31 March 2019

Coupled with bursts of orange to crack open the day Glints of silver and strands of gold All to behold...for you, to you My most humble hand-painted morning " Hello" Very good poetry

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Prabir Gayen 31 March 2019

If I, to sketch you a sunrise, On an empty calling canvas New and all your own I'd use the kindest colors, soft And pencil-in the break of day Muting the horizon.... beautiful

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 March 2019

After sunrise an empty sky is painted with sun-rays. As it emerges from a long night's sleep the announcement is made as per sweet light. An interesting poem is beautifully penned...10

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