Wednesday, July 9, 2008

To See You Smile Comments

Rating: 4.5

You steal the smile from my lips,
When a single tear dropp comes to your eyes.
You make me want to give up,
The whole world to only make you smile.
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Anam Rizvi
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Greenwolfe 1962 13 July 2008

This is such a sweet collection of words from a woman or a girl who loves her man. To have the love of a woman, is a wondrous thing. GW62

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iSha Girl 09 July 2008

I agree with Jasmine. Very well written poem Anam!

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Anita Raine 09 July 2008

wow..brilliant I really love the third stanza: For this pain and these years and these midnight blues, They'll be gone like the dew. Hold my hand and you'll know its all true...... this can be apart of a great song

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