To See Venice And Die Comments

I beg to differ, I say, 'See The Kaba and Die'

I have seen more than most people my age....but I still want to see more and I find myself bargining on some level everyday....nicely written!

Oh, I thought this was wonderful Herbert...I think many people find themselves bargaining with god for 'just a little more'. Very nice. Sincerely, Mary

Thanks Andrew, the title was the easy key to understand the meaning of the poem. Simple bargaining session with God about squeezing a bit more time out of him for myself. Have seen so many who want more days, even hours....just a few more. H

Would you mind reading it again? You will come across the attempt of postponement of the inevitable. Thanks for kind words. H

i've either missed the point, or this is devious fun. salut.