Friday, September 9, 2005

To See Or Not To See Comments

Rating: 4.5

I see a young boy
eyes closed
fingertips searching
Pretending he knows not what he does.
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Lylyanna Pilewski 10 September 2005

I liked it. I liked that second to last line. Lylyanna

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Caliban's Dream 10 September 2005

that is the question, great poem, and its always easier, in the dark or with your eyes closed to face emotions, stark reality in the daylight is uncomfortable

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 09 September 2005

Good poem. Liked the last two lines in particular. Well written.Thank you.

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