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But the problem was not me!

The third stanza does not read as smoothly as the first two. It's a pleasure to read some rhyming poetry that's done with such expertise.

Felt like an Emily Dickinson piece, with a nice rhymes and a bit of a moral. Lovely. -chuck

this is a wonderful not- so- simple poem. a big idea succinctly addressed. last verse 'see' x 2 expected to read 'me' 'the problem that was me' thanks Martin