Monday, February 19, 2007

To Runaway Comments

Rating: 4.8

to runaway to fill this pain
hate'in every day to hate it in every way
to fill this every day
to deal with memoires
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Gina Glaser
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Walt Martin 02 July 2007

... really fine! (Stranger things have happened, but for two days prior to discovering your anguishly tearing, beautifully written poem 'To Runaway', I'd been working on a poem ('To a Runaway') which lyrically chronicles the acceptance of a 15 year old girl in flight, who found acceptance and solace in our communal family of thirty years prior... Yup, we knew we were breaking the law, but...) Even if I could put my personal experiences and sentiments on a far back burner, this would still be a treasure. Again, this is fine work!

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