Tuesday, October 23, 2012

To Run From Someone.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Am I running from me,
Or, someone I don't want to see?
When, I was far, I wanted to be near.
But, coming near, I discovered a fear,
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Neela Nath Das
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Kee Thampi 05 November 2012

a ambush, not for a fight When, I was far, I wanted to be near. But, coming near, I discovered a fear, a fear, which takes me away,

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Unwritten Soul 26 October 2012

The poem done in so free way, release the mind and stand strong as it self..it is a simple and strong poem! _Soul

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Dave Walker 25 October 2012

A powerful poem, like it.

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Hazel Durham 24 October 2012

Billiant poem, our scars from past experiences makes us want to hold back, the joy of being impulsive is gone it is sad but i know the feelong well!

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So Close 24 October 2012

good poem and great work......no one is alone for everyone there is someone and we should wait for him or her: -) »so close«

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Romeo Della Valle 23 October 2012

Deep and thought provoking write which is well penned and poignant! You are not alone in feeling this way dear Nilkshi Das, we all find ourselves trapped in this darkness in life but one way or another, we find the light that will help us get out and reach a higher level of spirituality and understanding clearly the very nature of our existence! Beautifully crafted and touching write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

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