Sunday, November 18, 2007

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And we caught sight of flooded fields
across our unexplaining lives,
dazzled by a brief bright light;
not knowing what we saw
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Peter Jones
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Sonny Rainshine 18 November 2007

I really like the sound of these lines and their flow. Startlingly effective incongruity of eyes deafened by the rain. Good poem.

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