A smile or a wave
As I catch your eye
Just makes my day
As I pass by
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Most of all want instant love, instant sparks, but sometimes love needs time to grow and sometimes love doesn't grow as interpreted by your poem, titled PoJo. I voted #10, but the voting machine isn't working properly.
Very good Vanessa, I really enjoyed this poem, Keep up the good work. Lynn
A smile or a wave As I catch your eye Just makes my day As I pass by ............this is profound poetry, deeply made, I was engrossed through out and but mostly I liked the above stanza. can u plz read for me ' guilty dog' its about an account of a street kid in RSA`s streets. thank you
Wow..this was a really great poem, Vanessa, sweet, great meaning and a great flow throughout....enjoyed reading it...thanx 4 sharing with us...gave it 10! SG