Sunday, November 8, 2009

To Pojo! Comments

Rating: 4.3

A smile or a wave
As I catch your eye
Just makes my day
As I pass by
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Vanessa Hughes
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Shadow Girl 18 July 2011

Wow..this was a really great poem, Vanessa, sweet, great meaning and a great flow throughout....enjoyed reading it...thanx 4 sharing with us...gave it 10! SG

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Sally Plumb Plumb 21 March 2011

Lovely light poem.

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Elke Seven 20 March 2011

Most of all want instant love, instant sparks, but sometimes love needs time to grow and sometimes love doesn't grow as interpreted by your poem, titled PoJo. I voted #10, but the voting machine isn't working properly.

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Lynn Glover 19 March 2011

Very good Vanessa, I really enjoyed this poem, Keep up the good work. Lynn

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Lindo Mvelase 09 November 2009

A smile or a wave As I catch your eye Just makes my day As I pass by ............this is profound poetry, deeply made, I was engrossed through out and but mostly I liked the above stanza. can u plz read for me ' guilty dog' its about an account of a street kid in RSA`s streets. thank you

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