Thursday, December 17, 2015

To Peel An Onion Comments

Rating: 5.0

You cannot peel an onion
without a stream of tears
or fix a broken mirror
that you have loved for years
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Liilia Talts Morrison
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Ratnakar Mandlik 18 December 2015

You can not peel an onion without a stream of tears or fix a broken mirror that you have loved for years. Beautiful diction of a perfectly rhymed poem. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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