Thursday, June 16, 2011

To Papa With Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

You were my inspiration, you were my all
Like you, I can find no other pal.
You filled my heart with happiness
Even thinking of you gives me so much peace
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Sarda Mohan
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 16 June 2011

I liked it. Great poem written very well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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