First paint a cage
With an open door
Then paint
Something pretty
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favorite lines: But if it does sing it's a good sign A sign that you can sign. again, i liked this! i shall use it in Section C of November's showcase, with the original of course. thanks. bri :) to MyPoemList also
oops! looking for an original poem from YOUR hand (for the Oct. showcase) , not a secondhand one! :) bri p.s. too bad, since i already commented on this one.
Gino, i only read the English version. gracias. verrrry surrealistic? ? ? well, in parts. i like it. especially: Paint also the green foliage and the freshness of the wind The dust of the sun And the noise of the creatures of the grass in the heat of summer And then wait for the bird to decide to sing what language DON'T you know? bri :)
I love this. Very intriguing! Kept my interest to it's wonderful conclusion!
Read this beautiful poem on Bri's showcase. Sorry for mistaking your identity as of a woman. Had not visited your page by that time. Thanks for the translation.