Saturday, June 22, 2013

To-Night Is Lonesome Comments

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So as I lay my heart down
to-night
I set a goal of your heart
To be in my sight.
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Daniel Warner
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Ellias Anderson Jr. 11 December 2013

what gives pleasure to the people of this universe? love? friendship? . truth? what does this world is needing really.....where are we going? i always believe in true friendship. all over the world. there is no true love unfortunately in the world we are living n, people are thinking about their own wishes, if you stretch your hands out to help a man to stand, that man (perhaps) will think that you want something instead of your action... this poem, is one of the most beautiful works that i ever read. Keep up writing good stuffs Daniel.

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Morose Mermaid 03 December 2013

But you is all I want to be seeing Before I lie cold and dead... Love this verses... nice write...

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Sharon-Ann Dawson 26 September 2013

I really love this. Thank You. x

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