Friday, April 1, 2022

To Myself ~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

Teach me your tricks of smiling,
that the heart learns and the brain follow;
the world only looks at the rising,
though they may be false and hollow.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Richard Wlodarski 07 April 2022

Satire can be very philosophical. And funny at the same time.

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Susan Williams 04 April 2022

oh! this is poetic and deep philosophy--absolutely a great read!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 April 2022

A beautiful poem so well expressed. Very inspiring.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 April 2022

i JUST Lovin' it Doc

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Kostas Lagos 02 April 2022

Clever poem, lovely rhyming!

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Shreya Hacks 02 April 2022

We need to follow the norms..

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 April 2022

Wonderful. There is a lot of depth in this meaningful composition. Top score!

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M. Asim Nehal 02 April 2022

Thanks my friend.

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