To My Younger Sister Comments

Still I wrap you in earnest prayer, And plead my Lord to keep you safe, From the storms and gales that sweep your way........ impressive and touching expression with full of love. It is a great tribute to your sister. May God bless you both.

This poem mirrors my heart and I feel I could have been the author.While going through the poem the memories of myself and my younger sister come rushing.Many a time I read the poem and every time a new fragrance emanated. What a lovely poem ! I WISH YOU AND YOUR SIS ALL THE BEST IN LIFE. With regards, Chandra Thiagarajan

wat a beautiful n innocent wish for a sibling...god bless u both n may ur love for each other grow with every passing year....a v touchy poem

the prayer of an elder sister is beautifully written here! Nice to read!

Your beautifuly words giving us a great insight to a wonderful relationship never to be lost even with distance. Thank you

The words are timeless for everyone who reads this, even if you are not her younger sister you still can have lot of inspiration from this_Soul

Oh i can so relate dis heartwarming fab free verse poem, sibling rivalry n all to my sis too. Pls read mine too.

A poignant, uplifting song of deep emotion handled with grace and beauty.This shows a sincerety that is very moving. Family ties should stat unbroken. A real joy to read

Wonderful love indeed. I like it.

Wonderful! I bet you your sister will cry while reading this poem. What a good memories of the past. You succeeded in putting me on a trip to my early life.

Beautiful Valsa - I don't have a sister so I envy you. It must be wonderful to have something and someone so very special. A great tribute to her.

Affection, love you poured here for your younger sister in a very fantastic way!

Dear Valsa, Through this excellent poem you've out poured your close and loving feelings towards your younger sister, in all its grandeur.All through the poem I felt as if I was the author spelling out my feelings towards my younger sister.It made me read the tender write again and again. THANKS.

Fantastic one! It reminds me of my own sister. The expression that you gave to your poem are the expression of every heart that had a nostalgic understanding and feeling! Loved it. 10

Fantastic Valsa. You started with memories, became a teacher, told us about the love you two shared and then you prayed. It was a brilliant piece. I loved the twists here and there. We chased each other in eager search, Like hungry cats sniffing for milk. You have shown your intense love for your sister. the between two sister is really unique. It appears as if I know you very well.