Friday, January 29, 2010

To My Young Wife Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am writing umpteen verses
And my lass dances in grace.
I am glancing at the twinkling stars
And they whisper all our secret themes.
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Ravi Panamanna
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Jessie Mahoney Bathis 21 March 2010

Extremely heartfelt and poetic. An absolute joy to read. Thank you for the recommendation. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 07 February 2010

a poem written by a talented poet. i enjoyed it. marks 10. shan

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 02 February 2010

this poem brings tears...the most intimate relationship is some times made hostile

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Lady Grace 31 January 2010

before i start, i want to say, this will go to my fav.... mirrors of reflrctions come to end in beauty over cloudy skies sometimes it will break the shadows in memories of past times... your piece is very sentimental coz sentiments are written here there, i can find rough words but fine thru lips of honest but proud... thanks for inviting in this page where thoughts of memories are find there, in the pen of the author bleeds the nicest words for us.....

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Marieta Maglas 30 January 2010

Like us, the candle is burning And my dreams are on an endless wing. excellent written lyric poem, thank you for sharing.. 10/10/10

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Aldo Kraas 30 January 2010

I feel that there are a lot of circunstances in life Some we can't change Because it is caused by the weather or by a hurricane A flood in your house can leave you broke That is full of difficult circunstances

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 30 January 2010

a fantastic poem on separation... with profoundly passionate urges for meeting.. write more such poems..I loved reading your poems. U may also write comments on mine.poems on love and Haiti Or Netaji Bose.

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Maravan Shelley 29 January 2010

Really a good thought that flow into a verse... enjoyed the show.

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Ravi Panamanna

Ravi Panamanna

Ottapalam- Kerala State- India
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