Friday, August 14, 2009

To My Wonderful Soul Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

As you fly in yr dream with jasmine
Or dive through the sea with Ariel
I want to tell you a true story
Not the perfect fairy tale
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Niken Kusuma Wardani
COMMENTS
Nooruddeen Mm 14 November 2009

Good work; a real good tribute Congratulations Rgds Nooruddeen

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 22 August 2009

A fantastic and wonderful poem.

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~ Jon London ~ 21 August 2009

A beautifully tender dedication you have written here Niken...your heart warming lines flood the page with a natural bloom of love...stunningly vibrant in tone adds a freshness on the mind and heart whilst reading this wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing this with us...I wish you both every happiness. God bless Jon

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Dr.subhendu Kar 21 August 2009

fantastic homge blazing the glory of lovely daughter, texture is unique genre, wrought ingenious through imagery,10++, thanks for sharing

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Chitra - 20 August 2009

wonderful...sensitive, lovely and befitting! !

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Luwi Habte 18 August 2009

so very nice poem, and a lovely father u r nice one Luwi

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Obinna Eruchie 18 August 2009

What a touching homage to your daughter.

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Surya . 18 August 2009

a poem so lovable with hopes and advises. good mother and daughter pair.thanx for sharing. voted10 surya

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 18 August 2009

This poem is so sincere and heart warming that I am losing my words. A mother's love showering on her daughter! Very well penned Niken Kusuma.

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Ency Bearis 18 August 2009

a beautiful moving write...a tribute to your daughter which rendered nicely...

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Catrina Heart 18 August 2009

You’re always be my princess – I adore you mind and heart Yet you the beautiful Aurora or cute like pink Patrick You’re a best reward in my entire life Which no amount of money or time can beat I can’t show you the end of the rainbow But we will find our precious pearl in a silver chest --------- so lovely and heartfelt..hey! you made me cry to this beautiful tribute to your daughter...........loved it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10+++++++

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Omar Ibrahim 18 August 2009

lovely poem.....really wonderful....i hope your daughter be a poetess like you then we will wait for her at the poemhunter.... :)

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Lady Grace 18 August 2009

a very beautiful poem dear...i cant say nothing, , , so beautiful...

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rago rago 18 August 2009

nice poem and the will to live.............. let not tear and have faith in us......God will always there to guide our innerconscience........

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Kee Thampi 18 August 2009

to write few words on this fairy poem, it will teach us more than life, Godly smile of....nothingness around this World... I pray that God would spare us a life So we can travel around the fantasy world We’ll fight the dragon and rule the castle And be back into real world when you ready To fight tears and fears with faith and love And winning the life-time dream… I’ll be there! ! (Dedicated

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