Tuesday, August 27, 2019

To My Wife On September 20th,2019: Happy (70th)birthday ….To You, ‘my Love'! !….. [ One's Mate ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

It happened, nearly twelve years now in our past;
I promised [really? ] that, you, I would outlast.
In other words I ‘promised' I'd not die before YOU,
so, don't forget to die OR my life will NEVER be - -
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Bri Edwards
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 30 September 2019

Hi Bri, A different kind of love letter to your wife. And of course, a fascinating birthday poem. Did your wife read this poem? what was her expression? I wish i had seen it. I like the competition of who will die first. I am sure you will live past mankind's extinction..... :) :) I must vote for this poem of dear poet Bri.....10

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Savita Tyagi 07 September 2019

Love, life and death....is it time to roll your dice and take your pick. Love survives it all no matter what you pick. happy birthday to your wife.

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Aniruddha Pathak 04 September 2019

It begins with a lighter tone, almost all thru, but ends beautifully on a serious note. A good read.

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Valsa George 02 September 2019

A great avowal of love! But I wonder why you desire so much to outlive her! If she dies before you, she won't be able to hear your declaration of love for her! So keep telling her while she is with you that you will love her till your last breath (so that she will make for you more beautifully flavoured ice creams!) A great birthday gift for your dear one!

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Tom Allport 29 August 2019

A wonderful loving tribute for the love of your life beautifully expressed BRI and don't forget YOU are only as old as you feel?

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 29 August 2019

Ha ha you banter your wife in a super cool and fantastic way! Live past mankind's extinction woah funny. It's a fab bday poem! Kudos!

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Paul Brookes 28 August 2019

I like this it is comic but full of love great write my friend

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 August 2019

A wonderful poem for your beloved wife. Very lovingly done. A unique and heartfelt write imbued with humor. Liked the ultimate atanza. Very touching.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 August 2019

A poem is a wonderful gift to anyone especially when it is given on a special occasion. A gift that will be treasured a lifetime.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 August 2019

A beautiful poem, tad melancholic ala Mister Bri. More an orational poem. This is a beautiful poetical speech. Thank you for sharing, Sir Bri! A 10 Full Score

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