Monday, December 30, 2013

To My Voice Comments

Rating: 5.0

My word, have you murdered me?
No? Then whose word? My what? Am I killed?
Did you do it? What have you done to me?
Is it to me though, is it to me?
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V P Mahur 28 March 2014

Dear Sandy, this is a deep poem. Nice write. Thanks for your comments on my poem.

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Aria Siren 14 January 2014

I love your style Mark for some selfish reasons. It inspires and moves me. And it never fails to seize my attention, demand my full interest. I feel like your style is constantly morphing and while it changes, you still keep this Mark stamp on it that tells me it could be written by none other than you. A few lines in particular from this poem really grabbed me: You are as mine as the bottled love that I threw and the ending....sigh....what an ending Oh my word, I'm sucked down to you By a vacuum of insufficient knowledge Forgive me, I am not as eloquent or insightful as you are in your reviews. But I did truly enjoy this. Cheers. ~Aria

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