Saturday, February 13, 2016

To My Valentine Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hey, smiling beauty
My ravishing companion
Come into my life, to give it a lift
I shall sing for you our love's tuneful lore
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 October 2019

Part - 2 forget. Thrilling expression. The concluding stanza is much impressive and meaningful, Thank you dear madam for sharing this beautiful poem on love with nice graphic, a rose the symbol of love. Full vote.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 October 2019

Part - 1 In this poem " My Valentine" you have delineated touchingly about the feeling of a lover towards his beloved. The lover says in your pen....In my solitary room you sit and smile / As I go for a walk, you are around me...Your pervading aroma / Stirs and thrills my nerves../ I see magic hiding in your eyes / In your company, my aches I

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Chinedu Dike 19 November 2018

Beautiful romantic piece of poetry, lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing.

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Souren Mondal 15 February 2016

It is such a metaphorically rich poem Valsa ma'am.. The rose, as a symbol of beauty, that ultimately withers is extremely apt even for human beings.. Love is such a precious and tender sentiment, a collection of so many emotions.. But, even as I see this, as a poem simply about someone who loves flowers (I really love roses in my room all the times) , I can appreciate the beauty of it.. Sometimes all that we need is a sweet flower in our room, making it smell like love.. There is beauty in that... Thanks for sharing Valsa ma'am :)

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Kavya . 15 February 2016

wow that was too good a write, Rose as a Valentine, yes who will not adore that beautiful Rose in door or out door, the company is thoroughly enjoyed by everyone. Wonderful poem with superb concluding lines, loved it! ! !

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Nosheen Irfan 15 February 2016

A splendid poem on love. The rose as a symbol of love is a very special flower n your poem is as beautiful n enchanting as a rose.10

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Ging Taping 14 February 2016

will you stay with me as an abiding companion..I love this line two thumps up! lovely written

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Mark Heathcote 14 February 2016

A lovely seasonal love poem my friend well written.

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M Asim Nehal 14 February 2016

Ha ha ha...emotion flowed freely and it ended in lighter moment where butterfly is envy to your love...10++

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 14 February 2016

Beautiful valentine so beautifully you developed in the poem. We are all delighted to get this valentine.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 13 February 2016

Somehow, without scrolling down to the image below, I could figure out you were singing about a rose. Your poem is as beautiful as the flower. Your Valentine would be immensely pleased to receive it and read the poem too. (10)

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Valsa George 13 February 2016

I am so happy Rajendran ji! You guessed it right! Thanks for your encouragement!

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Kelly Kurt 13 February 2016

Anyone would be counted as fortunate to receive such a lovely Valentine

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 13 February 2016

Wow! Taking the reader to a climax and dropping like a hot porridge, on to a bed of rose petals. Amazing and appealing to the day's theme.X

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