Thursday, February 5, 2009

To My Unborn Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

You came, you left
So fast, so swift
Like the lightning
It's here, it's gone
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Duh Huh 25 June 2009

This is so sad and a loving tribute to the child. Its awesome. Thank you so much for sharing :)

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You left an emptiness A longing, a need You left questions We'll never answer............ reckless killings of child for the fear of bleak futuere...shame on us..... beautiful write.... i love to give 10..... m male poet.... read mine 'Don't kill me' butterflies around..just augment ur peoms

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 21 April 2009

great write here my friend this reminds me of a poem made by tupac.. brilliantly made.. bravo!

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Fiona Davidson 25 February 2009

Powerful write Lalay...wonderful read...thank you...Fi...10++

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Christopher Murphy 23 February 2009

Asad delicate read, full of emotion.

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ata khan 09 February 2009

yes it is sad, very sad. But as Lalay says, we will follow too.

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ata khan 09 February 2009

yes it is sad, very sad. But as Lalay says, we will follow too.

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Ency Bearis 09 February 2009

so sad...hope you recover for the loss..nice self contemplation write...10

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