Wednesday, September 11, 2013

To My Sweet Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lay here dreaming that you love me
In that half twilight world between sleep
And being awake just before dawn
When it is neither night nor day.
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David Wood
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Melvina Germain 12 October 2015

Sadness prevailed, so many can relate especially in the so called golden years...Excellent.....

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Marvin Brato 05 November 2013

A melancholic poetry.... love gone as one awakens from dream to sad reality!

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Valerie Dohren 19 October 2013

A lovely poem David, and yes I can surely relate. The loneliness is hard to bear.

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She is never gone as long as you care to remember And at your bedside unseen she will always stand And someday or some night you will eventually join her To hold hands once again in a more beautiful land (good touching poem Sir, - welcome to my site too)

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Joseph Anderson 09 October 2013

It is so hard to let them go. A sadly beautiful, bittersweet write. I feel your pain from this touching poem.Perhaps a new start would heal

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Poetheart Morgan 19 September 2013

Your poems Poet exude the scents of flowers even when is a sad poem. A beautiful describe of lost love. Thanks.

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Noreen Carden 18 September 2013

Hi David what a beautiful poem a lovely one to read well written

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Heather Wilkins 18 September 2013

beautiful writing touching

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Poetheart Morgan 15 September 2013

Ah! A poet heart beats fast inside the chest! ! !

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Sekharan Pookkat 15 September 2013

A lovely poem-The new dawn of love begins

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Lyn Paul 14 September 2013

Beautiful words David. Everyone just presumes that you just soldier on. Let us hope your strength can, yet nuture these memories.

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Yasmin Khan 13 September 2013

dreamy love and lovely dream, I liked it much.

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 September 2013

Beautiful poem. Touching indeed. Lovely dream knowingly it will bring tears to your eyes.. Heartfelt. Loved the way you presented it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 September 2013

Deep feelings of missing affection expressed in the poem. The feeling is all the more intense just before dawn when one does not know what world one is in. Only way out may be to remember all the pleasant times.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 11 September 2013

A golden leaf like a wrapped with sweet memory floating into the mind tinge of life lovely poem thank u

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Ramesh Rai 11 September 2013

a very touching write.tears rolled down. no more comment. wish to read it again n again.

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Valsa George 11 September 2013

A moving write, echoing a sense of longing and loss! The new dawn begins to wake me from My slumber and my lonely torture begins. It is when the world teems with activity, that one is reminded more of one's loneliness!

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Dave Walker 11 September 2013

A really wonderful poem, sometimes when we are between waking and dreaming it can seem so real. a fantastic write.

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