Monday, October 21, 2013

To My Son (Acrostic) Comments

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May tomorrow makes you realize my boy
In this world your life is not a toy
Can you not listen to my lecturing
Hear me when I am talking
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Mary Forrester 25 October 2013

Lovely poem Marvin, loving words from father to son.

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Hathy Tong 22 October 2013

Wonderful. That's really all I can say.

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Valerie Dohren 21 October 2013

Great advice from father to son. Well done.

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Dinesan Madathil 21 October 2013

A wonderful discourse upon what is ahead, what is that to be done and what not.. Apart from that, here is the warmth of a father`s true relation felt in kind and tone. A fine write Marvinji.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 21 October 2013

Let your energy flow freely At things worthwhile not deadly Great advice for all and particularly to the young. A good direction is of great value. Nice poem. Thank you.

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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