To My Sister Comments

I have already commented on this a couple of times, but it was certainly worth coming back and reading again!

What a beautiful poem. Real emotion told in simple words and pleasing rhyme.

A beautiful tribute to a wonderful sister ceremoniously rich in tone. A very compassionate composition written with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing.

Her poems capture life, but never tell of anger.... of strife. when my tongue was mean and foul. She taught me to be good and kind.... She has been a sister, mother, friend.... //..... Thanks for introducing such a lovely and caring sister.

The typical sister. A beautiful sibling relationship... can feel the love. Thank you..

Loved your work.awesome

Thank you for writing a comment on my poem that is just as beautiful as this tribute to your sister! Kind regards, Margaret Alice

A beautiful portrait of an ideal sister nicely painted......................................

What a beautiful poem. Your sister will be so proud. You have put her right up there with the angels, where she's earned so very well, the right to wear that halo. A stunning example of unconditional love between siblings. Thank you so much for sharing this very personal poem. You have a wonderful talent in your writing and you have every reason to be very, very proud of yourself. May your sister's footsteps continue to guide and inspire you.

What an absolutely beautiful poem this is. Oh yes, you are truly a poet equal to your sister. And it rhymes, how happy I am! Keep writing, poet you are excellent! 10+

where there is a will, there is sometimes a way.................to get a message to a PH poet who 'wishes to not receive messages! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i like the poem (very much, or course) , but here is why i came to one of your poems............. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i wished to acknowledge and thank you for sending me the following comment on a poem: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Date & Time: 12/18/2015 3: 43: 00 PM Remove this comment Poem: 44126997 - The N E V E R Stamp: It's 'guaranteed'! ! …… [mail Delivery; Inspired By Kelly Kurt; Humor/Humour; Medium Length] Member: Spock The Vegan Comment: In the city where I live some love letters and other mail was discovered after 19 years in a bank type drop box of a closed down store (this week) . - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i've heard, when i worked at post office, of mail being discovered, fallen behind equipment years earlier no doubt, during remodeling/rearranging in the post office. and i used to 'worry' some lobby customers would drop 'outgoing mail' into the plastic 'recycling bins' put in lobbies so post office box patrons could recycle they wished to recycle. i've also found mail accidentally left (including by me) in sacks which were supposed to be empty! such is life. thanks for more 'mail horror stories'; at least it wasn't the 'fault' of the post office at a closed down store! bri :)

She taught me to be good and kind, and drink the bitter cup. She made me promise that I would before she let me up. Verily, a lovely tribute to a lovely sister by a lovely brother, Loved reading and commenting, .....................................10

A towering and touching tribute my friend!

You were right I did like this poem you wrote for your sister!

Had to come back and read this marvelous poem again. Your sister must be pleased with the praise you have heaped upon her.

A very pleasant poem. It's simple in the best possible way. If I compared poems to various drinks this would be fresh water. Your sister should be proud!

Your sister is right, rhyming can be so military and confining, there is much beauty in alliteration and assonance which can enrich any parlance, why stick to end rhyme when rhyme can hide anywhere in a line? And this is a beautiful tribute to your sister.

A fabulous, well-written tribute to your sister.