To My Princess Comments
And so yesterday I met her
And the sun will my witness bear,
She was on her way to the river
When suddenly I was attacked by fever,
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SHE IS A QUEEN AMONG PRINCESSES That's just the right degree of hyperbole, it doesn't insult her with faint praise nor does it vex her with excessive praise. Your poet-speaker is an honest man - when he talks to he lets his imagination excite her imagination but his speech conveys the ordinary details of a man in love. She will (hopefully) recognize his double worth - as a man among men but also a poet! I like the way his admiration for her grows as he learns more about her, he never seems to be driven WILD with desire. He can be trusted - that's the outstanding character trait that comes through. The poem is so very open-ended. Please write the princess's response. It will make a fine companion poem.
a beautiful love poem to your princess filled with passion
At the sight of your Madonna, did your heart fall into the river with a 'plop'? A dip in the cool waters of that river may cure your fever (joking!) Enjoyed this great song of love, so beautifully rhyming and so fervent! Instead of gold or silver, what you have gifted her, I think is more valuable!
Your 'poor stick with ink' has provided us with a lovely love poem. Love at first site can be very dangerous indeed. And with such lovely words you will never be truly poor. Darla :)
Nice poem. Subtly and superbly penned. A 10 for you. Thanks for sharing. Please have a look at my poem #393 MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. Remain blessed.
Very Funny and interesting Abekah. Knowing you are the Grand Son of William Shakespeare, i undoubtedly know what you are capable of. Very brilliant piece of writing. I couldn't help myself laugh out laud. My favorite was But only this my poor stick with ink, Which I can use to heal you when you are sick. Is your poor stick a herbal drug or a pharmaceutical drug which you will heal her with? ? Or what kind of ink would that be to heal a person? ? LOL
Then with your apple let me be fed..... Best chat up line ever. If this is written from experience you must be lovestruck. If not then you have a powerful imagination. Well done.
GrEAt piece.very nice. But only this my poor stick with ink.like a tread and pin.your poem is with shape.i like it.
A very great and a wonderful poem of love... True feelings and emotions.
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7/24/2025 6:24:14 PM # 1.0.0
This i dedicate to you; with the muse of peace and love. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.