To My Pen Comments

Lovely poem. Your pen....proceed. Write more poems succeed. Feed the need for us to read.

Inspiring poem.......pen is symbol of prosperity.

so o lovely pen ASIM DO proceed

......many miles to go........brilliantly written.......thank u, dear poet......anjandev roy.

Lovely poetic expression with punctuation. Very beautiful poem.

A pensive and penful poem.

Dear Asim ji, lovely poem on pen. May the pen continue to write. Not to bother about commas and colons. Enjoyed reading this short poem full of meaning......5 stars

Ayudhapooja Bow to thee, the pen Thanks Asim Ji

A message to pen to proceed further, in fact the poet is not encouraging his pen, he is encouraging himself. It's the self encouragement that carries a poet to a great height. Asim Nehal proved it.

A well inked poem. Truly fascinating...5 stars*****

Comma or full stop does not matter. If we notice then we can know that life is continuity. We can proceed ahead with much clarity. Pen takes you many miles far due to beautiful writing and gain popularity. This poem is beautifully penned...5 stars..

Don't take long period. Proceed. You have many miles to go! My pen…Superb....metaphor

Great philosophy of life. Nice metaphor.5&*

Great philosophy of life. Nice metaphor.

Proceed on! ! ! ! ! Seed of peace! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Pen the ink of a pen the ink of a wise pen never knows the FULL STOP in the life of writings!

It is said that 'pen is mightier than sword'. Yes, I'm fully convinced. And the history of mankind too will endorse this view. So, when you ask your pen to proceed irrespective of the irritants and impediments out there to restrict its flow, it shows its power as well as that of the hand which holds it and the head that motivates it. Thanks for a fine poem.

Very original poem! Very well written and a pleasure, indeed to read!