To My Motherland Comments

Kamran one day u will be a great poet. Keep writing such beautifull poems.

This is a very moving poem. The last stanza was particularly powerful. I wish you good times in your poetic ventures. You expressed your feelings well, and it made a poem well worth reading again.

A very good poem by a good poet

An eloquent tribute. Applause for your beautiful motherland. And strength for your own poetic journey, my friend. Kindest regards, Sandra

bye the way, I'm too small to comment on your poems...but its good.

The paths you walk leads you into a learning zone. The only learning zone you need is to find yourself. Excellent verse. Give you 10! ...Best wishes Suzan Gumush

Struggle is part of life.We have to struggle in order to survive.At home, school, work place or leisure, we will face some kind of oppression.Take it as a challenge and be mindful that they 're part of living.The toughest seems to go through but not without hindrance.My brother Kamran, you're the son of the soils that you stand.Honor them and don't even think to leave! Pakistan Zinderbad! ! ! ! !

its very nice but too long for me..........well done