Friday, February 27, 2009

To My Lover Comments

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To whom leave me a lone with his pictures and his memories
To whom crying me and destroyed my dreams
To whom drawing the smile on my lips and pull out it by force from me
To whom make me fly in sky and dropp me on the earth by his order
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Sarah Hamid
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Rajinder Singh 25 June 2010

sadness has been broughtout well.beautiful poem.keep writing

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Akram Awadat 05 February 2010

nice poem, well done

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

Nice I Love You poem.

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 29 April 2009

your words are truly magical and lovely.. he's one lucky dude! u amazing!

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Oluko George 06 March 2009

You've employed relevant styles--description, rhythm through repetition, humour and Irony.Keep up!

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 04 March 2009

a touching lament of a lover, well done

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Dr Kamran Haider 27 February 2009

Little painful yet beautiful... keep writing...

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