Wednesday, March 24, 2010

To My Love....With Agony Comments

Rating: 5.0

I remember the day I met you
Such moments in my life are few
That was the day I realized
To a barren heart you came as dew
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Preetam Shetty
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Gita Ashok 20 May 2010

Good use of metaphors in this one.

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Amy Martin 18 May 2010

This is such a beautiful poem so meaniful and expressive thankyou for sharing this poem gave me goosebumps :) x

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Anonymous Butterfly 14 May 2010

I like the second stanza: I glanced at your beautiful face Something my whole life, I would love to gaze And when you smiled to greet I felt that our hearts did meet This piece is absolutely wholly romantic, sad and separation. And its full of emotion and longing. Have a nice day. B.B.

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