Wednesday, October 26, 2011

To My Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

The fear
Of what I used to hear
The dread and the death
Of wanting to be dead
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Dave Alan Walker
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Heather Wilkins 02 September 2013

simplicity offers the best poems nice write Dave

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James Casey 28 February 2012

Good, Simple, To The Point. Nice Write Dave, Keep up the good work

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Vipins Puthooran 07 November 2011

A good poem, simple and elegant.. Really I like short poem! ! ! ! 10+++

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Ramesh Rai 06 November 2011

may god bless your love to be everlasting.

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Asif Andalib 30 October 2011

Simply it's fantastic.10+++

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Asif Andalib 30 October 2011

Simply it's fantastic.10+++

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Richard McClellan 29 October 2011

Much emotion, very nice! ! !

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Crimson Love 27 October 2011

awh! this poem is truly sweet! you need not many words to describe that of love. very well done.

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Unwritten Soul 27 October 2011

Sweeeeeeeetest from heart, like it a lot...may you two have great moment with lily blooming around...Sweet without sugar :) Unwritten Soul

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Brianna Winebarger 27 October 2011

Great poem! It really is good.

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Jacqui Broad 26 October 2011

Only one's true love can make the sun shine on a cloudy day. May it last forever...

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Stefanie Fontker 26 October 2011

Aw, short and incredible sweet. Sometimes there are few words that let us see the ones we love in their truest form.

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(De Va) 26 October 2011

touched my soul.....smiles....

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Dave Alan Walker

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