Wednesday, September 19, 2012

To My Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love me forever as I love you,
I need your love to live life through,
When I found you that first time,
My life turned to joy and sublime,
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Amir Khosro Alai
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Dr Antony Theodore 31 May 2017

I was astonished at what we were, Two lovers wanting to be together, Separated physically, but not for ever, fantastic meeting.... love remains and remains and remains if it is true on the innermost reccesses of the heart. thank you dear poet. tony

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Jahan Zeb 26 October 2012

That is fantastic. The love the passion and the desire you have shown in this poem is amazing. I could go with the poem without reading to your story. Well written.

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Unwritten Soul 19 September 2012

You dont need extravaganza words and fantastic rhyme..simply sweet and the honest feeling already make your poem really highly appreciated, i like the flowing words as it smoothly from your smiles and past days that you enjoyed..and the description make it even more sweeter, for that i vote you 10 because of your talent and the poured all emotions.. :) Unwritten Soul

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