Thursday, May 16, 2019

To My Inner Child Comments

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Come, my child
Lay your weary head on my lap
Let the longing overtake you
As you enter the menopause.
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Joan Xie
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Jennifer Birchall 30 May 2019

A world of wisdom awaits that comes with age. Such a wonderful poem.

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Joan Xie 30 May 2019

thank you for your encouraging comments.

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 May 2019

Come, my child Lay your weary head on my lap Close your eyes at once Before you reopen them to the universe. At the end of poem your poem becomes really classical. thank u. tony

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Prabir Gayen 16 May 2019

Come, my child Lay your weary head on my lap Close your eyes at once Before you reopen them to the universe.. ... beautiful

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Joan Xie 28 May 2019

thank you so much for reading.

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