My life, My body is now shared,
But, it seems so fair,
As marriage made us pair,
Even though I dont always tell you,
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wonderful lyric poem, very well expressed................10+++++++
Expressive write. Really nice poem you had dedicated to your loved one. Coming to the writing you could have made it much more interesting. Just for example you could have mentioned 'And stood like a rock in my bad times' which would have carried the couple rhyming format. You could even have mentioned about today along with tomorrow and yesterday.But coming to the expression its really cute.
a good tribute to your husband. he should now fall in your trap for ever. nice poem voted10 surya
'Everyday, Now I pray, For the every new life, I remain your wife.' Beautiful write. Well penned Your husband is a lucky man to have you. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me
Wonderful words from a newly wedded....happy married life all along