Sunday, September 27, 2009

To My Husband. Comments

Rating: 5.0

My life, My body is now shared,
But, it seems so fair,
As marriage made us pair,
Even though I dont always tell you,
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anju addanki
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Indira Renganathan 12 October 2009

Wonderful words from a newly wedded....happy married life all along

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Mubeen Sadhika 07 October 2009

Emotional and sensitive poem. nicely narrated.

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Chitra - 06 October 2009

a loving tribute..filled with emotions!

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Marieta Maglas 05 October 2009

wonderful lyric poem, very well expressed................10+++++++

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Kranthi Pothineni 05 October 2009

Expressive write. Really nice poem you had dedicated to your loved one. Coming to the writing you could have made it much more interesting. Just for example you could have mentioned 'And stood like a rock in my bad times' which would have carried the couple rhyming format. You could even have mentioned about today along with tomorrow and yesterday.But coming to the expression its really cute.

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Indira Babbellapati 05 October 2009

happy togetherness...

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Surya . 05 October 2009

a good tribute to your husband. he should now fall in your trap for ever. nice poem voted10 surya

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Ravi Sathasivam 05 October 2009

'Everyday, Now I pray, For the every new life, I remain your wife.' Beautiful write. Well penned Your husband is a lucky man to have you. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me

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