Amorous pools sable and deep
Set lightly upon lustrous smile
Thy moonlit skin my heart doth keep
Stow’d away upon distant isle
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I enjoyed this poem and thought the rhyme scheme very helpful in the flow of the poem. The old English style was a very nice touch. I loved it.
I love the meter and verse, and the classical style of your poetry. Of all of the poets I've read over the last week, I would say your style and mine are most akin. I will read more of your work. Add me as friend. Maybe you'd enjoy reading some of my verse as well.
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