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The biggest ordeal is pain that attacks inwardly. It cannot be ignored, as this poem demonstrates.I feel that this poem is calling for a continuation; it is raising a question. What strengths does one develop by passing through such pain? How can one work with it? What is it impelling one toward?

shuffle and re-shuffle the daily activities to achieve the goal or aim in life; the god of luck has nothing to do if anyone spend the time lazily; well to read; congrats for being selected the poem asPOD

Congratulations, Prabhakarji, for this magnificent poem is Poem of The Day today on PoemHunter. The ideal theme, the metaphors, lovely, though not flawless, rhyme-scheme and words phrases used make it excellent and worthy of POD

The mantra of success, thanks for sharing wonderful poem

Sir I am of class 8D and sir your poem was fabulous 8080👍👍👍👍 Yours obidient Sarthak Singh

This is a beautiful poem on life and goal having touching expression with nice penmanship. Thank u for sharing.10/10

A poem that expresses your gratefulness for life. Thought provoking with a powerful and suited photo.

A brilliant poem with a fabulous picture. Congratulations Prabhakar! A full vote

Great imagery. Wonderful lines. Prabhakar, congratulations on Poem Of The Day!

I live by the mantra ‘hard work is another name for good luck.’ May yours pay off! Many congratulations for your poem being being selected as Poem of the day

'Never give up' is the eternal mantra. Perseverance and hard-work are the stepping stones of success. Life or destiny have mysterious ways to test our moral strength. Thanks a lot and Congrats for the day's honours.

Prabhakar, In the midst of this poem are, for me, excellent images— beggars who beg but never gain Once diamond toolived like coal And indeed it is true pain and difficulties can shape our character for good. Glen Kappy

One day hopefully pain will be something that has passed.. James McLain.. iip

a poem of caring then suffering for one's actions as life unfolds? ............well expressed Prabhakar

Who beg but never gain! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Oh! this is simply brilliantly expressed and very inspiring.......Prabhakarji........with soothing words.......I am really speechless......how beautifully you have composed.......... really deserves P.O.D....thanks for sharing....10+++++++

Rang lati hay hina pathar peh ghis jane ke bad. I very much liked the firm determination of the poet. I am sure he will rise to his dreamed heights. Congrats.

Truly inspiring and enlivening. Wonderful write. Thanks for sharing X