Wednesday, November 2, 2005

To My Friends Comments

Rating: 5.0

You’re their for me when I need someone to talk to,
Your someone I can trust with all my heart,
You can tell when I am having a bad day,
If it wasn’t for you I don’t know where I would be.
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Katie Huntress
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Mary Nagy 02 November 2005

Katie, It's nice that you have such wonderful friends....I hope they're always there for you. Sincerely, Mary

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Simon Whild 02 November 2005

Straight from the heart. You have some lucky friends, Kate. I liked the open simplicity of the poem, and it suggested it should be a song. I think this would be good set to music. Some typos on lines 1 and 2 though.

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