To My First Love. Comments
When my eyes opened it was you i saw,
and i felt love uncut and raw.
You were so fine that i couldn't ignore,
and everyday i loved more.
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Wonderful, that was a lovely poem that showed the deepness of your feelings and expressed the emotion very well. Keep writing. Try separating your poem into lines, it makes it easier to read and helps the reader distinguish were to pause. I loved the poem!
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7/28/2025 2:57:25 PM # 1.0.0
PURE-without a cause. Good expressionism.