Gradually they appeared
Tiny lustre black diamonds on my chin
A ne plus ultra of God's divine beauty on man
They appeared like the dark silken hair of a beautiful maiden
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You capture more than those first few bristles here - i think this is a skilled piece of evocative writing much.. I like its ace and feel very. thankyou
A very lovely Ode to a guy's first beard. I love the use of simile and metaphor. A lovely poem in all!
You capture more than those first few bristles here - i think this is a skilled piece of evocative writing much.. I like its ace and feel very. thankyou