Tuesday, April 30, 2013

To My First Beard Comments

Rating: 2.5

Gradually they appeared
Tiny lustre black diamonds on my chin
A ne plus ultra of God's divine beauty on man
They appeared like the dark silken hair of a beautiful maiden
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Samuel Oluwatobi Olatunji
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Michael Oliver 01 June 2013

You capture more than those first few bristles here - i think this is a skilled piece of evocative writing much.. I like its ace and feel very. thankyou

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Michael Oliver 01 June 2013

You capture more than those first few bristles here - i think this is a skilled piece of evocative writing much.. I like its ace and feel very. thankyou

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Melody Thaila Kuku 03 May 2013

A very lovely Ode to a guy's first beard. I love the use of simile and metaphor. A lovely poem in all!

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