Monday, August 7, 2006

To My Father Comments

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No time to say goodbye,
no time to feel the pain,
death was so shocking, when unannounced it came,
never will I see the face,
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Kee Thampi 14 August 2006

death was so shocking, when unannounced it came, never will I see the face, so beloved and so dear, the eyes, that lit up smilingly, when any of of us was near, Had I sat by your side, held your hand and bid farewell, I console myself thatyou are now, This poem makes me to some old memoirs....not of a sunshine, the glim face and dim light of real life, forgotten love of a old father, he is mine, he is more than a Godly

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Preeti - is here! 07 August 2006

I agree with Chandan, i just logged in and its a pleasure to read such a emotional poem. Great work! Preets

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Catastrophe King 07 August 2006

I was waiting to read something very nice.... I was reading every new poem popping up in the Homepage of PHdotcom.... Then up comes this one loaded with so much of respect and love for your father. I loved the way it is descriptive about your feelings.... TRULY... a good piece. A Good Read.

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