Friday, June 18, 2010

To My Father Comments

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You have me wondering, do you even care?
You don't call but every couple months.
And when you do, it's mostly silence because with you,
There's nothing that I will ever be brave enough to say.
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Leila Mass
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Gita Ashok 21 June 2010

You say you want everybody to be closer together. But little do you know you're slowly tearing us apart. Slowly chasing us away from you. Slowing changing love into a bitter feeling. Slowly losing us. Some words of advice? Don't make a promise you can't keep, father. There's so much emotion flowing through thse lines.You have written it very well.

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Leila Mass

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