To My Deity Comments

Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing, Amitabho.

A good start with a nice poem, Amitabho. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

I did feel all my nerves unnerved with touches of thy spells, There's a thin cloth upon thy swallowed of gales. That increased spontaneously my number of breaths, thy fire, finely divine……… a Wonderful Poem full of love and joy and emotions intimate…….. thank u dear Poet. tony

Love the visuals this unfolds as you read along each line, Alone thou sat before me with tears in eyes bright, At the dead silence of the forlorn night in lunar light. simply beautiful.10. Annette.

burnt into nothing, but ember remains, might in one morning, fires rise again. Through the perilous seas of feelings, we can finally find an isolated island to rest, as long as the past remains in memories. I enjoyed reading this.

A brilliant read, particularly due to your use of the metre with such precision.. Welcome to Poemhunter Amitabho.. Thanks for sharing :)

Nicely written, Amitabho. Thanks

oh so sensitive, tltgant, divine! you are my favorite!