Thursday, February 18, 2010

To My Daughters Comments

Rating: 4.7

You are destined for greatness,
Yet you do not even know,
You have such passionate feelings,
Yet you never let them show.
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Denice Woods
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Khairul Ahsan 25 August 2013

An extremely well written poem,10/10. I'm sorry for not being the mother you may have always wanted, I raised you to be everything that I am not, Only because I want the best for you, So you don't have the life I've got. That's indeed like a good mother. I only hope your daughters will realize and recognize the pains here, and your strong resolve to make them ' everything that I am not, '

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Your Thoughts 19 February 2010

very very good. i think this poem speaks to all parents with daughters. KEEP IT UP

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