To My Critic Comments

" I wait for YOU, who would make me, before I die, a subject of Criticism." Nice lines.10+🙋‍♂️

I loved your innocence, your beauty but I myself destroyed it by my ignorant attitude. You could never accept me as I am because you loved me a lot and had infinite hope for me. I killed all those hopes also. forgive if you can

I disturbed you to be with you, to make you feel I was(am) always with you. I had no intention to hurt you or to harm you. If I knew with my arrival your life would become so complicated I would never come.

Forgive me for all those mistakes I made knowingly or unknowingly whether to show love or anger. I disturbed you to know you more, to feel your presence more. I cried to you to get your sympathy and love.

I wait for YOU, who would make me, before I die, a subject of Criticism../

My conscious mind reverberates my unconscious self, Green field is becoming blue without the cadence of furtive mist, ..//

I wait for YOU, who would make me, before I die, a subject of Criticism.

Your Sagacious voice to tear me with rough strife,

I wait for you to read and evaluate me and my poems, I wait for your keen interest

I wait for YOU, who would make me, before I die, a subject of Criticism

IS THIS THE ENGLISH TAGORE SPEAKING WHO CAN BE BETTER THAN YOU YOUR OWN CRITIC NOBEL GUYS ARE NOW ON THE LOOK OUT OF POETS LIKE YOU THEY KNOW NOT ME PPP GGGGGGGGGGGGGGG OLDIE80

Constructive criticism and critic always welcome If critic comes with meaningless discussion so i think It does not need to criticise....e O reader come with wisdom Read the meassage of silent words....

A brilliant write! Thanks for sharing......10+++++++