We are the fruits
Of two diverse merged trees
Adhered to a single branch
And joined by the same roots
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This is a superb piece..... enjoyed.....thanks for sharing this poem.
Thanks Mam for remaining glued to your brother.An excellent poem that described the bond between siblings.
I have many brothers...We fight we play we laugh we cry together...We always have each others back in hard times...Good poem Rose of your brother and you...
We are glued On each other's life............fantastic......thank u.......anjandev roy.
I liked the first stanza the best. It stands out telling a lot about the brother and the sister. Very touchingly narrated.
We are glued/On each other's life/For our love and care......tender expression emitting fragrances of fathomless love...a very adorable piece of work!
But we always meet At the end of the sail Our common anchor Our family. Unfortunately in many families, there is greater rivalry among children! Then the home, instead of being a haven of love and comfort, turns into a. So happy to know that you flourish and prosper as a family in love and closeness! A lovely poem! A10
The bond among siblings is usually very strong. They have the same roots and upbringing and have many common traits. A family becomes a seat of bliss when parents and children live together in love and harmony! I am sure your brother must be a gentleman and you both bask in each other's love and companionship! Reading the poem one can easily understand how strong are the ties that bind you!
Most touching, most beautiful and greatest dedication to your only sibling. Such a huge emotive feel I get reading this Beauty time and again.
Indeed the bond of siblings knows no bounds. Utmost beautifully worded with loving care. I am truly touched by thy honesty. Thank you so much for sharing this most sensitive poem from your generous heart. A myriad of 10's for this gem. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved family.
So beautiful is the relationship of a brother and a sister...a great tribute to your brother
We are glued On each other's life For our love and care For each other Knows no end.....what more can you expect? God has given you everything!
We both rowed Our respective boats To different destinations But we always meet At the end of the sail Our common anchor Our family.........so touching and impressive.Beautiful poem that entangles me for second reading.
Side by side/We stood/The tests of life/That even the biggest storm/Cannot knock us down.........I always love reading this poem Rose!
(cont.) ...BUT, as a composition/poem, and as a tribute? to your sibling relationship, i think this is a delightful poem. you are lucky sister and brother if it is true! to MyPoemList. bri ;)
i've a few small suggestions but shan't bother mentioning most; ok, not a lot i have! ! you are the second PH friend whose poem i've read today, who seemed to be using boats which could be sailed AND rowed or paddled. I've heard that Greek? war ships had rowers for when the wind was not cooperating with the sails, but normally i'd row a rowboat, paddle a canoe, and sail a sailboat. verb tenses maybe could be more uniform also. (cont.) ..
We are glued On each other's life For our love and care For each other Knows no end..........beautiful family full of love. It is a great tribute to your brother. Thanks for sharing.
Blood is thicker than water. Nice poem!