Wednesday, November 1, 2017

To My Brother Comments

Rating: 5.0

We are the fruits
Of two diverse merged trees
Adhered to a single branch
And joined by the same roots
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Koffi B Sossou 04 January 2025

Blood is thicker than water. Nice poem!

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Anjandev Roy 04 January 2025

This is a superb piece..... enjoyed.....thanks for sharing this poem.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 04 January 2025

Beautiful Rose-Marie This reminds me of mmy own

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Rob Lamberton 04 January 2025

A lovely tribute to family ties! *****

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Nabakishore Dash 28 March 2022

Thanks Mam for remaining glued to your brother.An excellent poem that described the bond between siblings.

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Robert Austin 18 December 2020

I have many brothers...We fight we play we laugh we cry together...We always have each others back in hard times...Good poem Rose of your brother and you...

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Anjandev Roy 18 November 2020

We are glued On each other's life............fantastic......thank u.......anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 July 2019

I liked the first stanza the best. It stands out telling a lot about the brother and the sister. Very touchingly narrated.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 July 2019

We are glued/On each other's life/For our love and care......tender expression emitting fragrances of fathomless love...a very adorable piece of work!

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Valsa George 11 March 2019

But we always meet At the end of the sail Our common anchor Our family. Unfortunately in many families, there is greater rivalry among children! Then the home, instead of being a haven of love and comfort, turns into a. So happy to know that you flourish and prosper as a family in love and closeness! A lovely poem! A10

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Valsa George 11 March 2019

The bond among siblings is usually very strong. They have the same roots and upbringing and have many common traits. A family becomes a seat of bliss when parents and children live together in love and harmony! I am sure your brother must be a gentleman and you both bask in each other's love and companionship! Reading the poem one can easily understand how strong are the ties that bind you!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 January 2019

Most touching, most beautiful and greatest dedication to your only sibling. Such a huge emotive feel I get reading this Beauty time and again.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 January 2019

Indeed the bond of siblings knows no bounds. Utmost beautifully worded with loving care. I am truly touched by thy honesty. Thank you so much for sharing this most sensitive poem from your generous heart. A myriad of 10's for this gem. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved family.

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Abhipsa Panda 03 December 2018

So beautiful is the relationship of a brother and a sister...a great tribute to your brother

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 November 2018

We are glued On each other's life For our love and care For each other Knows no end.....what more can you expect? God has given you everything!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 August 2018

We both rowed Our respective boats To different destinations But we always meet At the end of the sail Our common anchor Our family.........so touching and impressive.Beautiful poem that entangles me for second reading.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 July 2018

Side by side/We stood/The tests of life/That even the biggest storm/Cannot knock us down.........I always love reading this poem Rose!

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Bri Edwards 20 June 2018

(cont.) ...BUT, as a composition/poem, and as a tribute? to your sibling relationship, i think this is a delightful poem. you are lucky sister and brother if it is true! to MyPoemList. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 20 June 2018

i've a few small suggestions but shan't bother mentioning most; ok, not a lot i have! ! you are the second PH friend whose poem i've read today, who seemed to be using boats which could be sailed AND rowed or paddled. I've heard that Greek? war ships had rowers for when the wind was not cooperating with the sails, but normally i'd row a rowboat, paddle a canoe, and sail a sailboat. verb tenses maybe could be more uniform also. (cont.) ..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 May 2018

We are glued On each other's life For our love and care For each other Knows no end..........beautiful family full of love. It is a great tribute to your brother. Thanks for sharing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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